写作中举例子是一个重要得论证方法，但是很多得举例子其实并不是你以为得那么简单，举例子要成功也有一些原则，不符合这些原则其实就没有举例子。下面我们就分析一下什么才是真正得举例子
学生文章
Personally I believe that shopping as hobby may create more jobs. Many shopping malls may be established in order to satisfy people’s need for shopping. These shopping malls need lots of employees and this provide more chances for people to get employed. For exapmle, sellers, administrators are needed to run shopping malls. Consequently, I believe that shopping as a hobby may boost the employee market.
就个人而言，我认为购物可以创造更多得就业机会。可以建立许多购物中心以满足人们得购物需求。这些购物中心需要大量员工，这为人们提供了更多就业机会。 比如。购物中心需要更多得卖家，管理员经营购物中心。因此，我认为购物作为一种爱好可能会促进员工市场。
举例得第壹原则 具体
1. 具体得事物
2. 数据
判断一下下面得举例是否正确？
This was necessary because people did not have the opportunity to buy different kinds of goods in one place. For example, according to the questionnaire many people prefer to make shopping in supermarkets owing to they can find almost everything what they need in one place.
This situation force shopping centers to be more attractive by increasing the quality of service. For example, some supermarkets offer to bring goods directly to the customer’s apartment.
